Oh, and the font change came through here, switching from a slightly smaller sans-serif to a slightly larger serif font. I might've just overlooked it, as there've been font changes of no obvious import in your pieces before, but I think the content did a fine job of calling itself out as distinct.
Nit: the only surviving descendent of my previous last spark bearer. Strike "last", IMO.
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Oh, and the font change came through here, switching from a slightly smaller sans-serif to a slightly larger serif font. I might've just overlooked it, as there've been font changes of no obvious import in your pieces before, but I think the content did a fine job of calling itself out as distinct.
Nit:
the only surviving descendent of my previous last spark bearer.
Strike "last", IMO.