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thnidu ([personal profile] thnidu) wrote in [personal profile] rix_scaedu 2018-01-13 03:12 pm (UTC)

Re: something I just noticed

That's clear. But did you see I was talking about sentence structure?
"...while Slinderin finished watering the cabbages with a list of repairs and adjustments that she considered necessary to restore normal daily life in Ailstbridge."
It looks as if that list is what Slinderin was using for the watering!

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