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I wrote this to [personal profile] zianuray's prompt request "How is Rensa doing?". This piece comes in at 1,241 words thanks to a paid extension and the signal boost I think I saw at the beginning of the month and now cannot find. (It doesn't matter if that was a figment of my imagination, because this is how long the story is.) This story follows on from both Looking For Needles In The Haystack and Gifting.

Yannic had built his wife a gazebo in a flower garden. After he’d explained to her why he wanted to give her a present, and some further negotiation, Rensa had agreed both that it would be desirable for her to have a private space to invite guests to that wasn’t part of their shared quarters, and that she liked the gardens. There were various other advantages to the scheme as well, but Yannic had gotten his reward when Rensa had been so happy that her pregnancy support group friends had come to visit that she’d burbled quietly for days. He took that to mean that either she’d been worried that her friends wouldn’t visit her home, or that she asked and they’d made excuses.

Yannic wasn’t quite sure why Kollec had been involved in that first visit, but now he seemed to gravitate into the general area whenever Rensa’s baby friends visited. Being Kollec, he was always carrying a clipboard or a data pad, but there was a betting pool running on his intentions. Yannic was splitting his money between complete obliviousness on his friend’s part, and a certain redhead.

The gazebo was both sheltered and in the open air, so Rensa spent a lot of time there with her baby even when she didn’t have outside visitors. She and Mirren would sit in the pleasantly mottled shade and watch their babies lying on their rugs and playing. Gathoc was a chubby little blond boy who mouthed everything, especially his favourite orange and grey splotched lizard huggy, while Tyreba was a mottle-haired, dapple-skinned wriggle-pot who’d already discovered that rolling over could get her to new and interesting things. Rensa was sure that Tyreba watched Gathoc to find out what she was supposed to do next. Yannic was personally convinced that his tiny daughter was beginning to try to talk to him, even if everyone else said she was far too young. Rensa simply smiled and said that he should encourage her, because how else was she going to learn to have a conversation?

All in all, things were going well. Rensa’s nightmares had retreated with therapy, friends, and no-one trying to take her baby away from her. Yannic saw no reason to mention to his wife either the several petitions he had received from groups who had thought that they were better placed to raise the tiny princess than her parents, or the steps he had taken to tell those groups to mind their own business. One particularly vocal woman had found herself transferred to a new administration hub in the subarctic/polar transition zone, and the Emperor’s Office had received no more suggestions that she should take over the care of the Imperial daughter.

Yannic almost wasn’t there when the head of the program trying to find other descendants of the, well, gods wasn’t the right word despite the temples, who’d been part of the colony’s founding population called upon his wife. The colonial support and development specialists had been loaded up with beneficial genetic variations to help make the colony successful. Entire sets of genetic advantages that some of Yannic and Rensa’s particularly short-sighted and self-entitled ancestors had done their best to wipe out. Having committed his own errors by helping kill off the former Imperial family before finding out that this was a bad idea, Yannic was sponsoring a program to find any other descendants of the colony’s first leaders because, frankly, the colony could do with all the advantages they could get. He was present at the meeting because he’d wandered out to the gazebo, an anxious secretary in tow, to get away from his desk for a while. Besides, time with his daughter was always a good thing.

Thus he, Mirren, Rensa, the babies, and the anxious Ballen were present when Director Pollgroc, who answered to Head of the Health Secretariat, arrived with his little entourage and a small escort from palace security. The security people waited at the garden gate while the Director and his companions, a younger man and woman, walked up the path to the gazebo. The younger man was carrying a baby. When they reached the top of the steps Rensa, who’d risen to meet them, said, “Please, won’t you all come in and sit down? It’s Director Pollgroc, isn’t it?”

Pollgroc appeared distressed. “I apologise for this intrusion, Your Majesties, but an ethical matter has arisen that had to be brought to Her Majesty’s attention.”

“Oh?” Rensa looked at him blankly.

“Your Majesty donated a sample for genetic comparison,” began Pollgroc.

“But I stole some and used your mitochondria for our pregnancy,” interrupted the younger man sheepishly. “My wife has a mitochondrial disease and we didn’t want our child to inherit it too.” Rensa continued to look at him blankly and he added even more sheepishly, “It was a breach of trust, and I have to apologise, and if you are offended and don’t forgive me it could be really messy….” He trailed off into silence.

“You only had to ask,” answered Rensa kindly. “I mean, everyone from your program has been telling me how wonderful my mitochondria are – every time I meet any of you that’s the first thing they say to me. Yes, you have my permission in retrospect to trial my mitochondria and see if they’re up to the task. Did the treatment work?” She looked at each of the adults and then expectantly at the baby bundle.

“Oh, yes,” confirmed the baby’s father.

“Then you want permission to do it again so you can have more healthy children?” Rensa looked at the two parents and added, “Please all of you sit down. Especially you,” she added to the baby’s mother. “I shouldn’t keep you standing around like this if you’re not well and looking after a new baby.”

All three sat down, the younger man still holding the baby in his arms and the woman leaning gratefully against the chair back.

After a glance from the Director the younger man took a deep breath and replied, “Thank you, Cerron and I would like very much to have more children, Your Majesty. The other thing we really came to see you about is that when our daughter, Glennen here, was born we discovered that your colouration distribution must be tied to your mitochondria somehow.”

“How? Oh!” Rensa sat up straighter, and asked eagerly, “Can I see her?”

Glennen’s father stood and walked over to the Empress to carefully put the baby in her arms. Rensa unwrapped the sleeping infant just enough to see the serious sleeping expression and her arms. The tiny, creamy skinned face had fine alternating gold and olive horizontal lines marching down the nose, more fine olive lines around each eye, and a flash of gold along each cheekbone.

“She’s very beautiful,” said Rensa quietly. “I assume you’re not asking me to be co-mother, so that would make her my demi-niece, wouldn’t it?”

“Well, yes, it would,” agreed Director Pollgroc with relief.

“Excellent,” said Rensa as she carefully handed the baby back to her nervous father. “It will be good for Tyreba and her future siblings to have cousins from both sides of their family. Just as it will be good for Glennen and her siblings to know that other people look like them.” She looked around brightly and added, “We should set up visits, shouldn’t we? Do you have a mothers’ group you go to, Cerron?”
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This comes of me going off on a complete tangent in response to the Tell-me Tuesday prompt "What comes next?" and asking [livejournal.com profile] aldersprig, whose prompts they are, what she would like to see more of. This is in response to one of her three answers. (I also ignored the word count.)

This comes after Viewing The Moon Rises and is pretty much concurrent with The New Guy. It comes in at 416 words.


Rensa was staring grumpily at her breakfast tea. She had just about had enough of being pregnant. It was eight days past her due date and, although she’d had an afternoon of false contractions a few days earlier, the baby showed no signs that Rensa could discern of leaving its current lodgings. Her lower back ached, she couldn’t get comfortable in bed unless she lay on her side using multiple supporting pillows, and people were clucking over her.

Mirren, her assigned companion, cousin by marriage and now friend, had been pregnant right alongside her, although a few weeks in front, and her son had arrived neatly on time to the day, even deigning to emerge into the world during the timeslot that had been scheduled for his mother’s next check-up. He had wispy blond hair, looked like a chubby-cheeked version of his father, and was adorable.

Even if he was making his parents redefine sleeping through the night.

Naturally, Mirren didn’t want company all the time, even if sometimes she desperately needed it, and consequently part of Rensa’s problem was that she had nothing to occupy herself with. The palace had a domestic staff who took care of everything, Rensa wasn’t allowed near a working ledger no matter how interested she was in the new accounts system, and for the first time in her life she saw the need for a hobby. Just when she had zero oomph to learn something new and couldn’t get comfortable to learn anything anyway. This morning she couldn’t even get comfortable in her chair at the breakfast table.

Yannic looked up from the reader he’d been handed by one of his staff when he’d come in to breakfast from the gym, because apparently Emperors weren’t allowed to wait until after they ate to start their working day, and remarked, “You do realise that you’ve been fidgeting about once every three minutes, don’t you?”

Rensa looked at him. “I have? I just can’t get comfortable in my chair this morning….” She trailed off and felt ridiculous for not noticing the timing herself. “Perhaps I should go off to the hospital wing, in case.”

“I’ll come with you,” said Yannic, turning off the reader and putting it down.

“You’re working,” protested Rensa. “I can do this on my own.”

“I’m sure you can,” Yannic smiled at her, “but you shouldn’t have to, and I want to be there.” He smiled wryly, “I may not be any use, but I want to try.”

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I wrote this to [livejournal.com profile] aldersprig's prompt "Rensa's world! consequences of the rebellion, positive." This occurs when the underground rail project starts kicking into gear....

“So, how far down are we going?” Lubboc was the new guy, brought in to replace a man who hadn’t been able to stand being in the tunnels.

“Today?” Brallic held his snack bar ready to take another bite, “In this rock we expect to make forty metres in twenty-four hours, so our shift will add about thirteen metres length to the tunnel.”

“But how deep are we going?” Lubboc seemed fixated.

“We’ll probably go off-shift at about the seventy five metre mark,” Brallic told him. “We’re working on the vehicle access tunnels from the forty metre galleries to where the eighty metre ones will be, so there’s not that much to go before we stop going down and start cutting the lower gallery.”

“Just so we’re not planning to do a short cut through the planet.” The new guy nodded in emphasis.

“No. Is that what they’re saying?” Brallic looked amused.

“Yeah, because how else could we get to some places as fast as this thing is supposed to go when it’s finished? I mean,” Lubboc swallowed nervously, “I’m really glad to finally have a job, but I was a bit worried about magma shielding on the borer.”

“I would be too, if we were going anywhere near it,” agreed Brallic, “but there aren’t supposed to be any magma intrusions within three fifty k of here. We’ll be fine. Besides, we have sensors to pick up that sort of thing, in case the planet decides to throw a wobbly on us and do something unexpected.”

“That’s a relief,” Lubboc smiled nervously. “I can only imagine that drilling into a magma chamber would be bad for us and the project.”

“Yeah,” agreed Brallic, “and where would their high speed transport be then? Personally, I’m not expecting run into that sort of problem until we start cutting the deep weapon chambers and I expect to be retired by then.” He had another bite of his snack bar and asked, “Are they really saying that we’re going to go through the planet? And people believe that?”

“Well,” said Lubboc apologetically, “so much amazing stuff has been released from the engineering and tech databases in the last few months that it sounds like it could be possible.”

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This comes some time after A Possible Way Ahead and runs to 738 words. It was written for [livejournal.com profile] aldersprig's second prompt.


Rensa was looking after Mirren for once, not the other way around. Bannoc was away giving his lecture to another set of new military recruits and Mirren was within three weeks of her due date. Her baby could decide to be born at any time and everyone knew it, so they were making sure that help was near to hand. Tonight it was Rensa’s turn to keep an eye on her. Rensa’s pregnancy wasn’t as advanced as her friend’s but if they called for help to get to the medical section of the palace, she wasn’t sure which of them would be whisked away more quickly. At the moment though, they were two pregnant ladies, positioned to watch the moons rise, in comfortable chairs they could get out of, with their feet up on footstools of just the right height and an array of suitable snacks carefully positioned between them. Despite that, Mirren was eating fruit and nut ice-cream.

“Shouldn’t you be having something healthier?” queried Rensa.

“I used to get a lot of my calcium from soft cheese,” said Mirren gesturing with her spoon, “which neither of us are allowed to eat at the moment due to our interesting conditions, so I picked this ice-cream as my favourite substitute.” She ate another spoonful and then licked the spoon. “I have a very indulgent husband,” she sighed happily.

“You do,” agreed Rensa. “In the best possible way.”

“Speaking of which,” said Mirren, waving her spoon around in punctuation, “you should let your husband be more indulgent.” The light from the first rising moon made her spoon glitter.

“What do you mean?” Rensa turned to her friend and companion/keeper. “Yannic does a lot for me.”

“He gives you things you need,” replied Mirren, “but you don’t let him give you things you’d like to have just because you’d like to have them. You get enthusiastic about something, he asks if you’d like it, and then you’re all sort of ‘No, thank you,’ and withdrawing.”

“I don’t want to be greedy,” said Rensa quietly. “I already have so much.”

The second moon came up over the horizon as Mirren pointed out, “Not that much that’s yours, and you lost more, which may be unkind of me to point out, but it is true. I know Yannic feels guilty about his part in that,” there was another gesture with the spoon, “and you can make him drown in that guilt or let him come to think it’s not important, but I don’t think you should do either of those things.” She ate another spoonful of ice cream. “It wouldn’t be good for either of you in the long run. Besides,” she went on practically, “very soon you’re going to need all the help you can get because babies take a lot of work to look after properly.”

“I know,” agrees Rensa. “Another reason not to ask for too much now.”

Mirren looked at her oddly and asked, “Are you budgeting that?”

“Um?” Rensa stopped for a moment and thought before saying, “I might be.”

“I’m fairly sure that’s not the way it’s supposed to work.”

“I don’t know any other way.”

Mirren sighed. “You could just let him give you love gifts because he wants to.”

“Why would he want to give me love gifts? I’m not Kiriel.” Rensa began to look pensive.

“He might want to give you love gifts because you’re Rensa,” replied Mirren tartly. “He was a widower. He’s allowed to move on and what he feels for you may not be what he felt for Kiriel, but that doesn’t mean it’s not love.”

“My therapist says that too,” admitted Rensa.

“So do you listen to her?”

“I’m trying to. Can we change the subject?”

“Of course,” Mirren conceded.

“Good,” Rensa smiled, “because between you and me, while none of the men are around, I think I know someone who’d be good with Kolloc.”

“Oh?” After Mirren spoke both women took a moment to appreciate the rising of the third moon.

“She’s one of the leaders in my support group. She survived a nasty accident that killed her first husband and she’s just had a son, so she’s probably nowhere near interested in new relationships of that sort yet…” Rensa trailed off, and then began again, “She has scars and the prettiest red hair.”

“Kolloc has been partial to red heads and brunettes in the past,” admitted Mirren.



This is now followed by Sometimes Paying Attention Isn't As Easy As You Might Think.
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I wrote this to [livejournal.com profile] aldersprig's first prompt.

Ritorian had been settled as part of Firilis’ defensive diaspora and it had begun with all the advantages that Firilis had given the other colonies. Then one important piece of terraforming equipment had failed. Attempting to repair it had killed two of the colony’s guides and their absence plus the inability to use the equipment that had killed them saw administration of the colony and its development program out of human hands by the time the third generation of colonists was reaching maturity.

The older two generations told them that they were living in labour camps, not towns, and that was certainly true. Participation in assigned work details was enforced by the Central Unit and its security drones, as was non-participation on days when work details had not been assigned. Breeding protocols were certainly in place but, generally, did not need to be actively enforced. Progress remained on track and every so often the Central Unit conducted surveys.

“What does this mean?” Sutoi looked up from the electronic pad he’d been given to work on. “Do you associate a colour or colours with the summer festival? If so, what?”

“I didn’t get that one,” replieded Garmedua. “I’ve got ‘Are you interested in making images for your own pleasure and/or the pleasure of others? If so, what type of images are you interested in? If you are uncertain as to your answer for any of these questions, would you be interested in undertaking a series of sanctioned introductory classes in work hours?’ What’s that about?”

The Central Unit local module interrupted with, “Human psychological maintenance for optimal physical and social functioning requires dynamic adjustment to ongoing systems. All questions are designed to elicit responses that will allow the design of systems to produce best case outcomes for the Colonial Development Program and for the colonists. Please resume answering questions. Please answer all questions presented to you. Thank you.”


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Here in response to [livejournal.com profile] aldersprig's prompt at my Female Characters and MarWomen post, is Rensa.


Rensa is an Imperial Princess of the Third Persisan Dynasty and the last surviving member of that Dynasty. When the revolutionary coup that breached the palace struck, she was locked in her work area’s stationery storeroom by her work colleagues and kinsmen and was not found until the resulting massacre of her family was over. She survived because everyone who would have had to pull the trigger had had enough killing for the day.

Raised, like the rest of the women of her family, to believe that her idiosyncratic skin markings and hair colouration were a sign of brokenness that needed to be concealed, Rensa had gone veiled outside her immediate family her entire adult life. She had also lived her entire life inside the Imperial Palace with the belief that she and all the rest of her family were responsible for repaying the rest of their colony world for the damage wrought by the Second Persisan Dynasty. Having wiped out her family and destroyed the world she knew, the revolutionaries striped Rensa of her veils and forced her on a months’ long gruelling trek on foot across the countryside to the Shrine of the First Emperor and back, ostensibly so she could offer prayers for the new regime.

It was not the intention of the charismatic revolutionary leader who originally ordered this that Rensa would survive the experience. During this trek she was kept on short rations and beaten but spared intimate indignities through the intervention of the man who replaced the initial charismatic revolutionary leader after he was killed by the security protocols of the Central Unit of the Colonial Development System. Rensa would probably still have died but for her extremely efficient metabolism, something which is definitely related to the genetic engineering her ancestors underwent.

Her return alive form her ‘pilgrimage’ meant that the new regime still had to decide what to do with her. Of the options of putting her to use, permanent incarceration, execution and releasing her to become a focus for old regime loyalists, they chose to put her to use. Consequently she was married to the new regime’s Emperor.

Her life could be worse. Her husband, a widower at the time of their marriage, is kind and affectionate but she doesn’t expect him to love her the way he did his first wife. He is also, in many ways, exactly the sort of man she would have hoped to marry in the days when her family was still alive. Her husband asks her advice on matters where she has some expertise or knows some of the history. She is pregnant with a much wanted child and the peoples she lives among, her husband’s associates, all wish her well. Those associates and her husband, though, are the people who killed her family and destroyed the life she used to have. She has had nightmares with increasing frequency as her pregnancy has progressed. The problem has become so bad that her husband has arranged for her to see a skilled therapist.

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I wrote this to [livejournal.com profile] kelkyag's prompt "Missing pieces: Rensa and her therapist at work."

“I’m not sure about this.” Rensa looked at herself apprehensively in the mirror. “Do I look ordinary enough? Well as ordinary as I can with this hair and skin.”

“You look fine,” Mirren assured her, “and you’ll do fine. You’ll be drinking tea and eating healthy snacks while I’m waiting to see the obstetrician and you know how long that can take if someone’s baby decides to be born. I think the record so far has been four in one morning. And I get to do this every week from here on in.”

“Is everything okay?” Rensa looked at her friend with concern.

“Oh yes,” Mirren waved her hand dismissively. “At this stage the doctor always wants to see you every week. You’ll see, you’re almost at that stage yourself. Now, go and enjoy your coffee morning.”

Half an hour later Rensa cautiously opened the door of the coffee shop her therapist had directed her to. Once inside she looked around bewildered. She hadn’t been in such a place before without Mirren to guide her or an official to direct her to where she was supposed to go. There were several groups of women scattered around the shop and Rensa wasn’t sure which one she was supposed to be meeting.

“Excuse me, can I help you?” When Rensa turned to face the speaker, the girl added a hurried and startled, “Your Highness.”

“I hope so. I came for a pregnancy support group meeting that’s supposed to be happening here?”

“Oh yes,” the girl smiled, “they’re over in the back corner. The lady in the electric blue coat is with them.”

“Thank you.” Rensa smiled back at her and made her way between the tables to the group the waitress had indicated.

Coming up to them, Rensa had a sudden case of cold feet and froze. On the far side of the table a girl, she must have been at least five years younger than Rensa, looked up and did a double take. “What are you doing here?” The question was blunt with shock.

“Someone thought it would be good for me to get out and meet people I had something in common with who weren’t friends or colleagues of my husband.” Rensa thought there was no need to tell these women and girls that “someone” was her psychologist, not at this stage anyway.

“What do you have in common with us, Your Highness?” The brittle blonde on the right put sarcastic emphasis on the title.

“We’re all pregnant,” Rensa said quietly, “and, as I understand it, we lack personal support networks. I don’t know about the rest of you, but my entire birth family is dead and my mother-in-law, a lovely woman, lives towns away.”

“Sounds like you’re in the right place then,” it was a red-haired woman with a freshly scarred face who spoke. “Pull up a chair and make yourself comfortable, Rensa. Falen, shuffle round to make room and stop being a bitch – this is a support group, not a secondary school queen bee shuffle.”


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I wrote this to shutsumon's Twitter prompt "Myth and Mythic Figures - Something more about the reality behind the so called gods and the Discord on Rensa's world." It follows on from Paradigm Shift.


“How many people has Moid suborned?” Suohonn drummed his fingers on the table.

“Not that many,” Kalhara, his wife, looked up from her terminal, “but they’re people who can spread his view of the world around. Apparently you’re holding Persis captive.”

“Please, I haven’t even laid a hand on him.”

“I know,” Kalhara nodded, “and, frankly, I think you had cause. I’m very proud of the way you acted when everyone turned against you and I’m still ashamed I was duped like that.”

“You apologised and I accepted,” Suohonn waved a hand dismissively. “As long as I get dessert ever second night, as a minimum, and you help me work it off, we’re good. Mind you, I think we’re good even without the dessert.” He looked directly at her, “I missed you when we weren’t talking to each other.”

“I wasn’t talking to you,” Kalhara corrected fondly, “or listening. You, on the other hand, never stopped trying to talk to me. Anyway, going back to the subject in hand, it seems the main conduit for Moid’s disinformation campaign is the ‘alternate news service’ run by Breslin. We can’t shut him down but Persis can put limits on him.”

“Well Persis is already auditing every decision Moid made in the last six years. Apparently he’d accrued more delegations than Persis and Hamily realised.” Suohonn grinned at his wife, “Remind me to institute a robust military audit function.”

“Yes, dear.” Kalhara clicked on a few more links. “For a start we can hope that in the audit Breslin loses his priority access to printer ink, now can’t we?”

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This follows on from Full Circle and was written as part of a word exchange with [livejournal.com profile] aldersprig.


They chose Cebor to undertake the task of rebuilding Firilis. Once they’d helped each other do maintenance on their ships, maintenance that more than one of them had hoped would take place in a fully manned shipyard, it was clear that Cebor’s ship was in the worst condition. If he resumed his rounds then it was all too likely that he would wind up like Sevan or Durcis.

The next step was deciding where to start. The worlds of the diaspora had all begun with their group of experts, specialised equipment and a master plan overseen by a central co-ordinating unit. Cebor lacked the group of experts so, considering how the Firilis they had known had worked, they went hunting for systems that were still looking into the ether for a connection. There were more of these than they’d expected, but they were, in the main, concentrated in a few specific areas and because they still had power, they had belonged to major institutions. On examination, half of those systems were either corrupted, trying to spread malware or both. Half of the others presented a logon interface or required a logon to access more than a certain amount of public information, but lacked the facility for Cebor to create a new logon and to have it activated. The rest either responded to logons he already had, were public access or verified his attempts to create a logon for the system. The entertainment sites could become useful to while away his evenings, especially if all the locals turned out to be hostile, but Cebor and the others agreed that the five university databases, six military command systems and the atmospheric observation laboratory system were most likely to be useful for the task in hand. Several of the systems seemed quite enthusiastic about being involved in the project.

Having gained access to the information resources they thought he was likely to need, they set out to help Cebor select a group or groups of locals to work with. The largest and most advanced groups were tempting, except one was the largest because it was actively conquering its neighbours and enslaving them while most advanced group worked by limiting the use of their best technology to the hereditary ruling caste and destroying anything they came across that was beyond that technology level. Another group was eliminated from the list of best possibilities because the university database in the same location reported that activation of physical library privileges correlated closely with individual physical termination.

Cebor was staring at the map displayed on the wall while the others debated the various merits and disadvantages of groups they were considering for the starter civilisation. “What about this lot?” He pointed at a green dot at the mouth of a river. One of the larger political entities on the planet was across the river from them and desert was on their side. There were blue dots marking active computer systems on a large island off shore and two more blue dots about the same distance away from the green dot but on the mainland.

“It’s a collection of outcasts and outlaws in a river delta swamp,” said Lian dismissively. “The True Man conformists across the river just haven’t gotten around to crushing them yet.”

Cebor manipulated the controls to bring up satellite photos they’d gotten from an orbital system they’d appropriated. It showed a town partially built on islands, partially on piles and partly on boats. “They’re innovative and come up with creative solutions to their problems,” Cebor noted, then changed the pictures on the display to show fishing boats and fields of swamp grain. “They support themselves and don’t live off raiding their neighbours. They’ve been driven into a swamp by a group I find to be ideologically about the second or third most repugnant on the planet but they’re not sitting around wailing about it. I may need to work with more than one seed group to achieve our goals, but I want to help these people.”

Cirian asked critically, “What would you do first?”

“Get them out to Irimdor Island,” Cebor pointed at the cluster of blue dots off the shore.

“They’ve probably already been there,” said Lian pragmatically. “Fishing boats.”

“But they didn’t have me to help them harvest photovoltaic cells to build a generator, get them into the university library and generally kick start an enlightened renaissance.”

Full Circle

Jan. 4th, 2014 04:19 pm
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I wrote this to [livejournal.com profile] aldersprig's prompt "Are there people left in Rensa's universe who know why these worlds were colonized?"

Cirian first appears in Return Visit.



Cirian was a week early to the meeting. She had thought to do some sight-seeing first and find out how Firilis had changed in the centuries she’d been travelling the stars. Perhaps do some shopping, she’d never touched her account with the Central Bank so there should be more than enough in there for a few luxury trinkets. Assuming there hadn’t been so much language drift that no-one understood the way she spoke anymore. It could happen, it had happened on some of the colony worlds on her beat.

Things had changed all right. The belt of space stations was still there but only automatic systems answered her hails. She boarded one that still held what was supposed to be a viable atmosphere but the heating had been off for so long she wore a spacesuit to prevent freezing. Some of the station had been carefully closed down with major systems mothballed, while other sections showed the signs of panicked packing and others again looked as if the occupants had just walked out without a backwards glance.

The communication logs didn’t tell her as much as she might have hoped, although she was glad to see that her logons and passwords were still recognised, so she took a copy to set her own computer to deciphering what had happened. Back in her own ship, she began to make the orbital observations she would have made of one of the diaspora worlds if she had just arrived there. She looked for lights at night, smoke plumes, discoloured water from runoff and discharge and signs of agriculture.

The others turned up in the next week, all except Sevan and Durcis. It turned out that Sevan had managed to get a subspace message to Lian, a miracle he’d gotten the temperamental thing to work, to the effect that he was stranded on one of the daughter worlds with a burnt-out drive but was otherwise safe. No-one had heard anything of Durcis and they all found the empty places at their gathering sobering.

It was Lian who raised the subject when they’d covered the agenda set down centuries before. “We were supposed to be reporting in to the central authority here, but it looks like no-one expected Firilis to disintegrate under its own weight. Do we even have a contingency for this?”

“Not that I know of,” admitted Cirian and the agreeing murmur went around the table, “so I suppose we’ll have to come up with something ourselves.”

“It’s not that long before the drift fleets reach the outermost worlds of the diaspora,” pointed out Karl, “barely four generations. Is that enough time for us to bring what’s left of Firilis up to scratch and keep the diaspora worlds on their timelines?”

“It’ll have to be,” replied Nirilan arching her hands in front of her while her elbows rested on the table. “So who’ll take the lead and where should they start?”


This is followed by Choosing A Starting Point.

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The Iphana stories are set in a sci-fi universe with the tag "defensive diaspora." There are some other stories set in the same universe but not on the same planet which I will include on this page because although they don’t affect Iphana they do help explain the background. The Iphana stories, in order, are:

On The Edge Of Disaster;
Winter;
Winter II; and
Iphana's Winter.

Another story set on the same world is It's Different Here.

The Rensa stories are set in the same universe but on a different planet.

The other stories in the same universe are:
Fire Sign I ;
Return Visit – this one explains quite a bit about the background, although it is very short.; and
Discovery.

Background pieces for Rensa which apply to the setting generally are:
Rensa's Universe Background Information Entry; and
Rensa's Universe: Background 2.
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I wrote this to [livejournal.com profile] aldersprig's sixth prompt, "Someone else in Rensa's world."

“Faceta Park? Why are we calling it that? It makes it sound like an Imperial Princess.” The speaker was one of the new aldermen; thin and revolutionary with views on the old regime. He was also from one of the newer parts of Malapar.

“It is being named after an Imperial Princess.” The man he was talking to was a local, one of the City’s Works Committee and a more physically robust model of revolutionary.

“Why?” The aldermen was one of those who still wasn’t quite sure how he felt about the new perforce Emperor marrying the last surviving Princess, the man could have sons with anyone after all.

The committeeman said, “You may have heard that members of the Imperial family had an allowance every year that they could allocate to a project of their own choosing.”

The alderman snorted derisively.

“There was the proviso,” added the committeeman, “that the project could not directly benefit them or any other member of the Imperial family. It could be something that was on the projects list or something that wasn’t that they thought ought to be done. The allowance wasn’t that much, 10,000 credits, so it mainly went on little things done although sometimes some of them would club together to do something bigger.”

“So?” The alderman was beginning to survey the proceedings around him with distaste.

“Sometime in her late teens, we have no idea how or why, Princess Faceta became concerned about the water supply and sewerage system in Malapar Old Town. At that time the City Council was concentrating on the New Town and the suburbs and seemed content to let the old town decay into urban detritus.”

“The Old Town was a slum when I was growing up,” commented the alderman.

“It was and much of it still is,” agreed the committeeman. “We’re still not a big item on the Council’s agenda.”

The alderman had the grace to look abashed.

“Princess Faceta put her annual allocation into maintaining and upgrading our sewers and our water supply every year of her life after that for the just over fifty years that remained to her.” The committeeman sighed, “It wasn’t much each year, but it was work that wouldn’t have been done otherwise and it had an incremental effect. There was a study that showed that after a decade her works were having a positive effect on health outcomes.”

The alderman made the connections in his head, “So her choice to do that year after year is why the Old Town had compatible infrastructure to be connected up to the new reticulation and processing systems in the rest of the city?”

“Rather than having to wait for the Council to vote the funds through and do the work?” The committeeman smiled, “Yes. So we decided to name the park that replaced the old sewerage plant in her honour. We thought she would have enjoyed seeing children who benefited from her decisions playing in the sun and fresh air, poor lady.”

“Poor lady?” The alderman snorted. “She was an Imperial Princess.”

“Who spent her life as a sort of housekeeper in the Imperial Palace and who died with all her kin and descendants when we stormed the Palace. There is a certain amount of local feeling that as she cared enough to think of our welfare,” the committeeman’s face was carefully blank, “the least we can do is remember her kindly.”

“Yes, you’re right.” The alderman nodded. “Sometimes the right and wrong of it all is a hard thing to hold certain, isn’t it?”

“Indeed.”

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I wrote this to [livejournal.com profile] aldersprig's prompt "Rensa, and something to give her some peace."

“In some ways,” the therapist said calmly, “it would be easier if you were still being abused.  Instead, the only ongoing abuse is that you can’t leave.”  She looked at Rensa with a considering gaze.

“But I don’t want to leave Yannic,” protested Rensa, “I…like him, a lot, and I want to have this baby and more after this one.”

“But you’re afraid someone will take the babies away from you?”

“Apparently,” she sighed.  “In my dreams, anyway.”

“Pregnant women do, occasionally, develop some odd ideas,” allowed the therapist, “so in this case we need to be able to determine whether it’s that or something more akin to a disease state.  Have you ever talked to anyone about your experiences on the day the Palace was sacked or on your pilgrimage?”

“A little, only to skim over it really.  The only people for me to talk to are Yannic’s cousin Mirren or people who were there.”  Rensa paused, “The ones who were there know and I don’t want to upset Mirren by telling her what her friends did that day.”

“So, there’s no-one you can talk to about these things?”  The therapist made some notes on her clipboard, “Have you considered developing other friendships?”

“I don’t meet other people on a regular basis, not to talk to freely.”  Rensa shifted uncomfortably in her seat.

“I think we may need to change that,” said the therapist briskly.  “Now, what were your interests before the regime changed?”

“My accounting, financial and economic studies, oh and reading.”  Rensa added, “I would have liked to have tried more handiwork, but materials were usually in short supply.”

“And what would you like to do now, if there were no constraints on your behaviour?  If you didn’t have to be Empress?”  The therapist smiled encouragingly.

Rensa thought for a moment and asked, “Could I still be married to Yannic?”

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I wrote this to Anonymous' prompt "I've been wondering about Iphana, and how her winter went (or that of the town) or how things went for either come the spring."

Iphana had a long and lonely winter, despite the microwave link back to town.  She’d read her mail, exercised religiously, made all her microwave contacts and spoken to maybe four people all winter, listened to the plays and music they’d patched through to her, tried hibernating around her schedule for a few weeks, intermittently kept a diary and gazed out an upstairs window into the storm.  Well, peeked through a crack in her bedroom window’s storm shutter.

Peering through that crack, she realised that the stories about a whole different ecology inside the winter storm were true.  Felinoids that could have laired comfortably in her maintenance garage stalked browsers with low centres of gravity across the snow outside as they rooted out whatever delicacies it were that they ate.  Some of the creatures chose to use her outpost as a backscratcher and the building shook with every rub of the larger ones.  Fortunately, it didn’t seem to occur to these great beasts that there could be an inside to the outpost, Iphana didn’t want to try dodging any of these creatures in their own environment.

She asked about them in her daily talks with the town but Sawyl had to tell her that the town never saw the large creatures in winter.  “The grass must be wrong or something,” he added.

“Don’t be sorry,” Iphana told him, “some of these things are big enough to shake the building when they rub against it.” She paused then asked, “Could that be the reason for some of the unexplained winter damage on outpost buildings I was reading about?”

“I can just imagine,” the voice of Auditor Carvell came over the feed, “the expressions on the faces of the engineers back in Central when they’re told that their buildings are inadequately braced for their secondary function of scratching post.”

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This is the second background piece for the December Prompt Request.

The colonisation of Rensa’s world had a purpose and that purpose is ongoing, still guided by a development plan with set goals and a timetable.  The education system is part of that, designed to produce the workers needed to further the current goals of the project.

The point of primary school is to provide a level of learning skills, literacy and numeracy as the basis of further education and professional development.  Primary school also begins the streaming process where students with particular aptitudes are channelled into particular career paths.

The streaming process continues through secondary school with specialist classes and schools.  It is possible, with early streaming into a career path, to finish secondary school as a technically-qualified engineer, or other professional, who merely requires supervision of ‘maturity’ issues.  This does provide a very narrowly focused education for those who are career streamed early in their education.  Other people aren’t career streamed at all.  Depending on their interests and abilities it is this portion of the student population who as adults provide general unskilled labour of various types, pursue careers which are not regarded as ‘necessary’ for the completion of the development plan but provide for a more liveable society or are relative late-comers to their chosen professions and bring a wider educational background than that of their professional peers to the tasks they undertake.

The education scheme inside the Imperial Palace before the Sack was a specialised variation of the overall system aimed at producing administrators who were skilled in the various financial and economic specialities while having a deep general knowledge relating to all aspects of the colony and its life.  The schools inside the Palace were notable in that all classes had face-to-face instructors for all subjects and no classes were held by video-link with distant specialist instructors.  The reason for this was the Imperial Household Office argued that the expenditure to allow this delivery was an unnecessary cost that would negatively impact on the Imperial Family’s efforts to pay off the damage done to the colony by the reign of the Second Dynasty.  This decision was disputed by the Family’s education cadre on the basis of a cost/gain analysis and the matter was undergoing submission to the Emperor for a binding decision at the time of the Sack.

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I wrote this to [livejournal.com profile] aldersprig's prompt "The city that learned hibernation, and why."  It's set on the same planet as the stories about Iphana.

The Colonial Development Plan called for a city there to supply services to the surrounding towns and settlements.  It would be an underground rail nexus and there was, of course, a long term plan for the deep residential, storage and work bunkers to dug down into the bedrock underneath it but for now it was going to be a surface city and that was the problem.  On the surface it was open to the weather and the weather here meant the winter storms.

Not just an occasional storm but a constant maelstrom of wind, snow, driven ice and cloud that expanded and contracted with the seasons.  Winds so strong that a heavy cargo hawler wasn’t safe in them.  Settlements and towns had developed successful strategies for coping with the winter storms so the planners examined those and selected what they thought would work.  Domes were rejected and tunnels were chosen.

“So,” clarified Maika, “the apartment building has two entrances, the ground floor one that goes onto the street and the lower ground floor one that goes into the boulevard underneath.”

“That’s right,” confirmed the building superintendent, a boy called Callow.  “You can use either but once the winter storms move in the ground floor door will be automatically locked so we have to think before we go out onto the street. At the same time the windows will automatically seal and we’ll be on air conditioning till spring,” Callow nodded in approval .

“That seems a bit extreme.”  Maika liked fresh air.

“Ma’am, the wind from the winter storms is fresh, but it’s not nice.  You don’t want it getting inside your apartment, the wind chill can bring the external temperature down to forty below.”  He sighed, “And it doesn’t just affect you, it increases the load on the apartments around you to keep warm too.”

“So we hibernate for winter?”  Maika had been expecting life in her new home to be different but this was more different than she’d realised.

“Yes ma’am, for six and a half months we need to be cave dwellers and tunnel lovers.”  Callow smiled, “I’m sure you’ll get used to it.  I’ve got some pamphlets here on decorating advice to help avoid seasonal depression and some on interest groups you might like to join to avoid cabin fever.”

“Thank you,” replied Maika faintly and took copies of them all.

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I wrote this to [livejournal.com profile] aldersprig's seventh prompt "More Rensa."

Rensa’s figure was blossoming, expanding its borders while inside her a small biological miracle was growing.  All the senior members of the regime treated, if not her, the baby she was carrying as a favourite grandchild, niece or nephew in utero so she was being coddled and advised and urged to do things that were good for her pregnancy.  Every time she made a public appearance there was a flood of letters offering more good advice.  Everyone seemed happy for her.

And then the dreams started.  Dreams where they came to take her baby away from her.  Dreams where she was alone, being pursued by angry, chanting men because everyone she thought she could rely on turned into mannequins as she reached them to ask for help. Yannic, Mirren, Tyrren and even Bannoc, leaving her in the end alone and surrounded by her pursuers.  She usually woke up at that point but one time they’d laid hands on her, she’d woken to find Yannic shaking her, and a voice had said, “The sooner you give this one up the sooner you can have another.”

She supposed the dreams were about the pressure to have children and the fear of losing them too, plus a good dollop of…something that her new life might all be a sham, a construct to hide the prison bars.  Figuring out what they were about might be scarier than having them…

“You have to see someone about these dreams you’re having,” Yannic said firmly over breakfast the morning she was officially seven and a half months pregnant by the calendar.  “It was only occasionally to begin with but it’s almost every night now.”

“I don’t think I had the dream last night,” Rensa replied carefully.  “Well, not to remember.”

“I think you did, or something as bad,” Yannic was looking stern.  “You cry and whimper in your sleep when you have that dream and that’s what you were doing last night.  I want to help you, but I can’t or at least I don’t know how.  That’s why I’ve made you an appointment with a psychologist.”  He put a card down on the table.  “She’s supposed to be very good.  I want,” he paused, “I want you to be happy and I think these dreams mean that there’s something that we need to fix for you.”

Rensa picked up the appointment and read it.  “For today?  Thank you.”

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This background piece talks about the world in Fire Sign 1 which I have elsewhere miscalled Firestuff.

The world known to the organisers of the Defensive Diaspora as Aberxhad 453.4 underwent a revolution and social inversion during the third generation of the colony.

Dissatisfaction among the general colonists with the political organisation of the colony, the tasking system, rationing and the perceived level of control over their personal lives by the Central Unit and the guides led to this.  The rebellion was successful in that the Central Unit and its security drones were destroyed while the surviving guides and their descendants were forced to flee for their lives.  As the rebels seemed to be smashing every piece of advanced technology they could get their hands on, the refugees had no qualms about taking everything they could get their hands on, and carry, with them.

The current population of the planet is made up of two societies with their origins in this event:

1.      The descendants of the revolution are confined to the southwest corner of the largest continent on the planet.  Native soils need to be ‘naturalized’ with appropriate microfauna and fungi to allow human crops to grow and the majority of the local plant life is unsuitable for extensive consumption by humans.  A near feudal system of landholding has evolved based on ‘proving’ new land with a series of tiered land holders, with first land holders having the most power, third land holders being tenant farmers and anyone below that being sharecroppers.  Theoretically anyone can prove land and become a first land holder but in practice the existing first land holders have restrictions in place to ensure that only they can do so; they have the power and so they make the law.  Essentially, all land in this area is now in the hands of three families and they are working to consolidate their holdings through little skirmish wars between distaff and main bloodlines.  The southwest corner is crowded and tightly held under their control and they don’t see a problem with that.

 

2.      The descendants of the refugees mainly live in an area that was being naturalized prior to settlement at the time of the rebellion and is sufficiently distant that the first land holders are not going to stumble on them accidentally but was close enough to get to easily with the transport they had available.  They have a much higher ambient technology level than the land holders but their population is smaller with a higher risk of inbreeding.  They also have more information available to them than the land holders because their ancestors managed to rescue most of the colony’s databases, mineral deposit maps is an example, and the equipment to access them.  They have a program of sending agents into land holders’ area to spread medical and technical information at a grassroots level but this is a dangerous task as if caught they will be killed.

A complicating factor in this is ‘fire stuff.’  This is heat-affected metallic and ceramic debris which can be found over large portions of the southwest corner of the continent and, to an unknown extent, other areas of the planet.  It predates the colony but the lettering found on some pieces appears to indicate human origin.  Its value to the landholders is that it is a source of useful metals: copper; gold; lead; and silver.  Naturally, as it is a valuable resource, there are tight rules in the land holders’ area about who can collect it and where from.

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I wrote this to [livejournal.com profile] aldersprig's second prompt, "More of Rensa's world, not Rensa."


“So why are you taking this blood and that swab again?” The patient was holding the cotton wool ball firmly onto the site the needle had gone into his arm. “I mean, I only came into see you about this cough.”

“We’re testing to see how far some genetic engineering that was embedded in a number of the original colonists might have penetrated the general population,” the doctor explained as he spread the sticky strip over the cotton ball to free up his patient’s hand. “It was intended to give the colony some advantages but there’s evidence the Second Dynasty might have eradicated the carriers.”

“What happens to anyone you find who’s got this stuff?” The patient was beginning to look worried. “Did the Second Dynasty have a reason for getting rid of it?”

“Apparently they thought the carriers threatened their authority,” the doctor finished labelling the samples. “It’s been suggested that they were too self-centred to realise that the genetics were important. If you’re found to be a carrier, well how do you feel about having lots more children?”

“My wife’d kill me,” then the patient laughed. “Are they expecting to find anyone?”

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“Professor, you’re the expert on the Second Dynasty’s purges of the god lines.” The Health Minister poured tea for the Head of the Health Secretariat and their guest, the professor. “Do you think anyone could have evaded them?”

“If the Dynasty’s own records can be believed,” Professor Jerrec sipped his tea and smiled in appreciation, “They were very thorough about it. To be a member of one of the target bloodlines and survive you would have to not have had the idiosyncratic colouring of the bloodline for start. That way no-one could tell just by looking at you. Then there would need to have been no record of you being part of the bloodline, so there’d be a break in your parental records because your father wasn’t acknowledged or you were a foundling. Of course there’s also that possibility that knowing that the squads were coming, someone managed to step into a dead man’s shoes.”

“Swap identities with someone who’d just died?” The Head of the Secretariat pursed her lips. “That would need an entire community to agree to keep the secret, wouldn’t it? Or you’d have to move away immediately, unless you swapped a live newborn for a stillborn. Done right that could have very few people in on it. Do you think we’ll find anyone, professor?”

“I think you’re more likely to find the descendants of people like Emperor Yannic,” smiled Professor Jerrec, “the results of princely dalliances and adventures.

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“What we’re actually looking for in this preliminary test,” explained the senior laboratory technician to Head of the Secretariat and Professor Jerrec, “is a tag we identified on chromosomes in the reference samples the Emperor and Empress supplied. We don’t know what it does but it does identify those chromosomes that are of interest to this study.”

“So,” asked the Head of the Secretariat, “have you found anything?”

“Actually, we have.” The senior laboratory technician’s smile gave her dimples. “There’s a clustering of positive results from Headwaters that we’ve traced back to a man who was conceived and born there without a recorded father while the Underpass through the range was being built.” She pressed some buttons and a family tree came up and scrolled through on the screen beside them. “With the help of Central Records we’ve been able to identify all his descendants and we believe that testing of these individuals,” names at the bottom of the screen bolded in blue, “will give us samples of Gedim the Engineer’s Y-chromosome.”

“That could explain why we get so many engineers out of Headwaters,” observed Professor Jerrec. “Have you found any female lines?”

“Unfortunately, no,” sighed the senior laboratory technician. “The most interesting thing about the Empress’ sample was her mitochondria. I’m quite in love with them and want them for my grandchildren. Another strain for comparison would be fascinating.”



This turned out to lead into Almost Everything....
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I wrote this to [livejournal.com profile] aldersprig's first prompt, "More Rensa, esp. Involving clothing."


“My clothes are starting not to fit,” Rensa announced to Mirren.  “Do I have a budget for maternity clothes?”

“Of course you do.”  Mirren’s pregnancy wasn’t that much more advanced than Rensa’s but she looked further along.  “Mind you, once I started shopping for my own maternity clothes I had them double it.”

“They’re more expensive than ordinary clothes?”  Rensa thought for a moment.  “Well, they do need more fabric.”

“I think it’s more that they see you coming when they either think you’re desperate or floating in a la-la land of happy hormones,” was Mirren’s tart response.  “I think we should start with the people you brought from last time and then expand from there.”

Everyday clothes and underwear for pregnant women were relatively easy to get although pricier than clothes for the not-pregnant.

The store that had reminded Rensa of her sex education lessons provided two made-to-measure coatdresses with frankly military styling.  The tailoring, as always, suited Rensa and the pleats below the high bust line allowed for her expanding belly.  The other stores she’d purchased from before didn’t have maternity clothes but they were prepared to suggest things and modify designs.

Rensa almost had everything she needed when they decided to try one of the stores that hadn’t let them in the door when they’d first been buying her clothes.  At this time of year it apparently didn’t need a security guard or a doorman.  Inside there were a few artistically arranged racks of clothing, two shop assistants and a woman with garishly dyed, multi-coloured hair who could only be described as difficult.

“Why are you offering me that size?  I’m obviously a 14, not an 18!”  Her hands telegraphed her indignation as loudly as her voice.

“Madam, you tried on the 16 in the green and it was that fraction too small,” the darker haired girl reminded her.

“That was a very tight cut,” the woman harrumphed, “and sewn even tighter.  It should have been relabelled as a 12 or something.  Get me a 14!”

“As you wish.”  The dark haired girl put the garment she was holding back on the rack and pulled out an identical but smaller one.  She turned to the lighter haired girl and asked, “Hellen, could you please see to the ladies who’ve just come in?”

Hellen turned but the customer grabbed her arm.  “No you don’t, I need both of you.  I’ll have a word with them while you get me that pink thing and in a 14 mind you!”

The woman walked over to Rensa and Mirren, oblivious to the fact that the shop assistants were following her with worried expressions.  Both young women looked bemused when they flicked their eyes over the two security men who had taken up stations inside the shop’s doors.  “I’m sorry,” the customer told Rensa and Mirren, “but the staff will be busy with me for some time.  You and your husbands should go get coffee or something, then come back.  If you think this store would have anything for someone in your condition.”

“I have found people to be very accommodating about our current condition.”  Rensa looked the woman up and down.  She could see how the other customer’s hair style had been inspired by her own but those colours had no place in nature.  “They’re not our husbands and who are you to chase other paying customers out of this shop?”

The other woman returned the up and down treatment.  “You look vaguely familiar, perhaps you were some minor hanger-on at one of my parties?  Don’t you know who I am?”  The blue, pink and green hair on her head practically bristled.

“No.  Why should I?”  Rensa was calm.

“Majesty,” Hirroc, one of her security detail, was deploying his ‘early warning system’, “is this woman annoying you?  Do you wish her removed?”

Rensa and Mirren thought the other customer might be about to faint.

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