An Update

[rix_scaedu]

 Clancy and Pae'kura 2.13 is finally up despite my keyboard.  For my patrons on Patreon https://www.patreon.com/posts/12123051

Comments

[thnidu]

Double xpost, manual and auto:
http://rix-scaedu.livejournal.com/289035.html
http://rix-scaedu.livejournal.com/288950.html

Comments after I read it.

[thnidu]

I love the teens' (kids'?) reactions. Very believable!

• comprehendible form
→ comprehensible

• our navy has a rule that observation decks ^ are occupied have to have no less than three people in them.
^ that
>Easy to get confused & miss, with that/than and has/have/have already in there.

[rix_scaedu]

Thank you for these, but my keyboard is being so diabolical that I'm planning on getting a new one this weekend. Updates and corrections will happen when I can be more certain that hitting delete or backspace will only do exactly what I want - and not take out half a line.

[rix_scaedu]

I've inserted the missing word, but I can't find:

"• comprehendible form
→ comprehensible"

It does sound like something that might have nee in an earlier draft....