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I wrote this to [livejournal.com profile] lilfluff's third prompt, "What changes in the world will the Atlanteans notice the most?"


 “I suppose,” ventured Archduke Josef in Atlantean, “you and your companions have not yet had time to assess all the changes that have taken place in the past two thousand years.”

“Atlantis is no more, fallen beneath the waves,” replied Hzoreda!.  “All other changes flow from that, surely?”  She was leading them to the Navigator through corridors that were considerably tighter than they would have been on an airship of the same size.

Archduke Josef reminded himself that they had to fit all those colonists in somehow and the suitability of the cross corridors and niches for ambushes was a side effect of the design, not a driver of that design.  “My Imperial master thought you should know the value of your time,” he handed her a folder, the papers inside written in Atlantean, “because every scholar on the planet who’s built a career and reputation on the study of Atlantis is going to want to confirm their theories by talking to actual Atlanteans.  You need modern resources and there is no need for even your lowest, common pool labourers to give their time to these people.  We have also taken the liberty of providing the names and contact details of several legal firms specialising in patent law in each of the major jurisdictions – your guildsmen may be able to obtain protection for some of their processes.”

“Why are you helping us this way?”  She was slightly puzzled.  “It cannot be in your interest to see us come to power again.  We would displace you.”

“Neither is it in our interests to see you starve or be cheated,” replied the Terrencian Archduke.  “I am under instructions to demonstrate the Emperor’s intentions to deal fairly with you.”

Naturally that was when the ambush hit them.

Five minutes later the attacking Atlanteans were groaning on the ground.  One of them had a broken arm, another was probably concussed and there was a scattered serving of fractured ribs among them.

“How?”  The one who’d led the Atlanteans down the ramp when it had first opened really looked as if he couldn’t understand what had happened.  “We are Atlanteans, you are barbarians.  You don’t have our advantages…”

“We’re at least as well fed as you,” Archduke Josef told him while his body guards loomed over the downed Atlanteans and the Kongoese Flight Lieutenant collected their weapons, “and we have been all our lives.  Plus while you were sleeping your way to the stars and back we had two thousand years to get better at unarmed combat.  Besides did you really think that no-one would ever duplicate what you did to your bodies?”  The Archduke smiled and the Atlanteans cringed.

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I wrote this to [livejournal.com profile] kelkyag's first prompt.  This follows on from The Atlanteans' Return - Part II and is followed by The Atlanteans' Return - Part IV.

“I will inform my kinsman the Mwene that you have accepted his hospitality and of your numbers.”  The gracious words flowed from his lips, meant like water offered to parched earth.

“I, Hzoreda!, thank you.  May I have the honour of your name, Mwene’s kinsman?”  The woman with the tightly plaited hair was equally gracious.

“I am Nkruma, First Lady of the Hzore.”  The words went back lightly and the woman gave a tight little smile.

“You are wise as well as gracious, Nkruma,” she responded.  “We will go back into our vessel to await word from your Mwene.”

“I am sure he will send word of a place you can settle yourselves shortly.  May your gods smile upon you until our next meeting.”

“And yours upon you.”  Hzoreda! shepherded the rest of the Atlanteans back into their ship and the door closed behind them.

The diplomatic party withdrew and the military tightened their perimeter.  As the Atlanteans were the Mwene’s honoured guests none of the air defences in that perimeter were pointed at the Atlantean vessel.

It took the Mwene less than a full day to send instructions.  The Atlanteans were being provided with a grant of land in the Huila District, if they promised and agreed to conduct themselves in accordance with Kongoese law.  The Mwene’s kinsman presented the Atlanteans with a copy of the Kongoese legal code.  He went on, “The other question is whether your vessel could fly you there or whether you will have to wake your people and have us transport them there.”

“We will have to read your Book of Law before we can agree to abide by it,” Hozoreda! was doing the talking again today and the Mwene’s kinsman wasn’t sure if that was because she was in charge or because she’d been delegated the task.  “As for flying there ourselves, I would have to consult with our engineers and the Navigator to know if that is possible.”

“There are many differences between our laws and our records of Atlantean law,” he agreed.  “Some principles are the same but some are very different.  As for flying to your new location, if distance is an issue, I have brought an aerial navigator with me.”  He indicated the tall, young Kongoese man in civilian clothes and carrying maps.  “He has relevant maps and a distance conversion ruler to assist you in your decision making.”

“Thank you,” Hozoreda! accepted graciously.  “He will need to come aboard to meet our Navigator.  Perhaps you would wish to send companions with him to view the glories of our vessel unimpeded by other duties?”

“As it happens,” the Mwene’s kinsman smiled genially, “the Terrencian ambassador has petitioned the Mwene for just such an opportunity.  Would he and his two aides be acceptable?  They are here now.”  He indicated the three fair skinned men standing to one side.

“Terrencians?  They make goat cheese, do they not?  Certainly.  If the four of them would like to come this way?”  Hzoreda! issued a pleased invitation.

As the four men disappeared into the Atlantean vessel an aide stepped up to the Mwene’s kinsman.  “Sir, why did you allow that?  It’s just handing the Atlanteans hostages!”

“I’m sure the Atlanteans think that too,” answered his superior reassuringly, “but Archduke Josef volunteered to go along to protect the Flight-Lieutenant.  The Archduke is a solider, his bodyguards are helots and they all fight dirty.  The Atlanteans might be in for a surprise.”

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